Question About Roof Section Drawing

[Amine]

 

I’m sharing my drawing for your review. Could you please check if it looks correct? I think there may be an issue with the roof section, but I’m not sure what exactly is wrong.

[ReMark]

Re: roof.  It's difficult to tell given the scale of the image above.  That aside, I do have a few questions.  Where are the closets in the bedrooms?  Why are there no bathing facilities shown, like a shower or a tub, in either bathroom?  Why are the hallways so large (almost room size)?  Hallways tend to be much narrower than rooms.  Where are the living rooms?  And shouldn't counters/appliances such as a refrigerator, electric or gas range and a dishwasher be shown in your floor plan?  Is the house completely wood framed or a combination of masonry and wood?  Depending on the situation your sections would be different.  Wouldn't a post or two be required under the first stair landing?

Edited yesterday at 04:06 PM by ReMark

[Amine]

Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate your feedback. I just wanted to clarify that my question was specifically about the roof cut section.

[ReMark]

Then post a .dwg file that we can downloaded and view better.  Right off the bat your roof cut section should appear differently in the two sections.  Judging by what I can see it's very similar in both sections.  This will be my last comment.  Good luck on your submission.

Edited 12 hours ago by ReMark

[CyberAngel]

1 hour ago, ReMark said:

Then post a .dwg file that we can downloaded and view better.  Right off the bat your roof cut section should appear differently in the two sections.  Judging by what I can see it's very similar in both sections.  This will be my last comment.  Good luck on your submission.

Yes, we should see the peak of the roof from one side and the ridge from the other. Unless there's a flat section in the middle.

[Amine]

Thank you for your feedback. It’s my first time working on this, so I didn’t realize I could upload the DWG file. I’ll share it so it’s easier to review. Thanks again for your time and advice!

Drawing1.dwg

[BIGAL]

A couple of comments, the outside stairs use a rectang with a wipeout so it hides the windows behind. Also there is no inside support ?

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I am metric but not sure about 2x4 for rafters at that span, there is no @ what spacing.

Ceiling 2 lines or even 3 with insulation shown.

Concrete beam arrow did not point to it, and a conc beam should be shown as a "T"

 

This detailing is wrong only show 12' beam not concrete at bottom. 

 

Cantilever balcony is shown wrong.  see red lines. There is no way a 4' slab can cantilever that far. May need some help on structural layout of beams in slab.

 Enough from me, its about learning. I am sure others will comment.

 

Edited 40 minutes ago by BIGAL